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HALLOWEEN
Scary is no fun as witches and vampires, spiders, spooky noises,
windows crackling, lights turning off,
zombies smoothing through the sun,
lightning and thunder bashing,
wind blowing the curtains like flashing lightning.
Now its fun.
by Jessica, Age 6, Class 2.
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4 comments:
I'm very impressed by the choice of words used by a 6yr old. Well done Jessica! I hope you enjoyed writing it as much as I did reading it.
I enjoyed reading this, Jessica.
"Zombies smoothing through the sun..."
That's my favourite bit.
I bet you had fun writing it.
Best Wishes
Pat Posner
I loved reading your work
from Emily Niven
Hi I liked your poem it was cool but you could write a little more like Emily said to mia because she only wrote 3 or 4 lines ok! other than that it was brilliant!
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