Daniel liked the film 'Ghostbusters'. Daniel spoke his review and his Mum wrote down his words. This is what he said:
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I’d like to eat the marshmallow man. The marshmallow man was funny. I liked the ghost bit. I liked when the Ghostbusters fell down the hole. I did like the bit where they sucked up ghosts into the machines. The scary bits were the lion and the fire. The other scary bit was when the policeman switched the ghost machine off. When the ghosts all came out I like that bit as well. The statues cracked and the monsters came out of the statues – it scared me. I liked the bit when the lions bit the man. I liked the bit when the marshmallow man went in half and the city went on fire. When the Ghostbusters went up all those stairs they were tired out. And the other bit that was very, very good was when she turned into a demon.
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by Daniel W, age 4, Class 2
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2 comments:
That's a great review, Daniel!
Best Wishes
Pat Posner
very good Daniel see u at school
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