Starting with the line - ‘On Christmas morning I unwrapped my present, opened the box and I saw...’- the Krazy Blue Kreators wrote about unusual Christmas presents they imagined receiving.
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On Christmas morning I unwrapped my present, opened the box and I saw.....a key with a little box. I opened it gently with the key. I saw nothing so I shut it up again and then I looked in the box that it was in and there was a note. I started to read it.
It said: ‘If you will want to be a star and be famous open the box and say - I am poor let me be rich can you come and save me?’
I scrunched up my face with confusion. I thought well I can try it. I turned the card the other way.
It also said: ‘If you don’t then you will be even more poor than before. Beware you might be a little painful. (Remember you have to do it to become really rich.)’
I thought: should I? Yeah I should. I opened it and repeated the words and then I got punched in the face. So I punched the creature back and pinned him down. I won! The creature disappeared and I became really rich. Yeah!
By Jade F
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On Christmas morning I unwrapped my present, opened the box and I saw.....a viper and there was a big rock worm called Onix. He was grey.
By Craig B
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On Christmas morning I unwrapped my present, opened the box and I saw.....a vampire! He had scary fangs and had scary blood dripping down.
By Abbie
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On Christmas morning I unwrapped my present, opened the box and I saw.....a big slimy muddy puddle. I put my finger in it. I tasted it and it was chocolate. But it had a light brown bit. I tasted it. It tasted of toffee and cream with toffee caramel centre.
By Mia Jade H
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One Christmas day I opened all my pressies when I found one present in the corner. I went over and opened it when then all of a sudden I just saw a pair of eyes staring at me! I screamed and all of a sudden a hand came out and grabbed me into the box!!! I went into another world. Then I only realised I was in a wood and in the wood there was loads of eyes staring at me. My Mum was wondering where I was. I was screaming and I was hungry and thirsty. When I went threw the woods I saw loads of hands going and grabbing me. Then I walked back and fell on the floor and my Mum asked me where I’d been. I said I was in my room playing.
By Megan T
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On Christmas morning I unwrapped my present, opened the box and I saw.....a fountain of doors. It was shooting doors out and I had to choose a door.
As I went in the fifth door all was silent and all was dark. Then I went closer into the door. A light went on and more lights came on. An ugly monster came in and with force it locked the door with me in it.
The monster had thousands of knives and the first knife he took he tried to kill me but I kept running. But before I could kill him “beep, beep, beep” my alarm went off. I told my mum but she said it was a dream.
By Kaya S
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On Christmas morning I unwrapped my present, opened the box and I saw.....a Quail. But not your ordinary Quail, multicoloured Quail and it talks human words. I said, ‘what a neat present’. But the more I played with it the more it talked and it changed colour. Wow! A week later my adventure started but I cannot tell you anymore because IT IS TOP SECRET!
By Charlie GH
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On Christmas morning I unwrapped my present, opened the box and I saw.....a big Hairy monster. It looked like a big gorilla. It felt hairy. I ran and I ran far away. It was not what I expected! It was a hairy, smelly monster!
By Jessica B
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On Christmas morning I unwrapped my present, opened the box and I saw.....a Porsche Viper. It had a button that you push when you are sitting on the seat and all the car goes shiny. It is shiny blue and green with fire on. It has spoilers on it.
By Tyrese
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On Christmas morning I unwrapped my present, opened the box and I saw.....a magic portal to another world which is made of sweets that when you eat them they just grow back. There was a swimming pool made out of chocolate and the water was coke. A beach made of lots of sweets and everything in the world was made of chocolate, jelly beans, coke bottles, marshmallows, cake, ice-cream, gum, fudge and many, many, many, many more!
By Emily N
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On Christmas morning I unwrapped my present, opened the box and I saw.....a scary remote control shark. It breathes through its head. It is scary and it electrocuted me.
By Callum S
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On Christmas morning I unwrapped my present, opened the box and I saw.....an alligator! Its eyes glared at me! I was scared. Its tail flicked at me and I went into the water. I was gone.
By Erin H
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On Christmas morning I unwrapped my present, opened the box and I saw.....a shark tank and mini sharks. One was a Great White. The other was a Hammer Head and the last was a Tiger Shark.
George R
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On Christmas morning I unwrapped my present, opened the box and I saw.....a key with a little box. I opened it gently with the key. I saw nothing so I shut it up again and then I looked in the box that it was in and there was a note. I started to read it.
It said: ‘If you will want to be a star and be famous open the box and say - I am poor let me be rich can you come and save me?’
I scrunched up my face with confusion. I thought well I can try it. I turned the card the other way.
It also said: ‘If you don’t then you will be even more poor than before. Beware you might be a little painful. (Remember you have to do it to become really rich.)’
I thought: should I? Yeah I should. I opened it and repeated the words and then I got punched in the face. So I punched the creature back and pinned him down. I won! The creature disappeared and I became really rich. Yeah!
By Jade F
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On Christmas morning I unwrapped my present, opened the box and I saw.....a viper and there was a big rock worm called Onix. He was grey.
By Craig B
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On Christmas morning I unwrapped my present, opened the box and I saw.....a vampire! He had scary fangs and had scary blood dripping down.
By Abbie
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On Christmas morning I unwrapped my present, opened the box and I saw.....a big slimy muddy puddle. I put my finger in it. I tasted it and it was chocolate. But it had a light brown bit. I tasted it. It tasted of toffee and cream with toffee caramel centre.
By Mia Jade H
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One Christmas day I opened all my pressies when I found one present in the corner. I went over and opened it when then all of a sudden I just saw a pair of eyes staring at me! I screamed and all of a sudden a hand came out and grabbed me into the box!!! I went into another world. Then I only realised I was in a wood and in the wood there was loads of eyes staring at me. My Mum was wondering where I was. I was screaming and I was hungry and thirsty. When I went threw the woods I saw loads of hands going and grabbing me. Then I walked back and fell on the floor and my Mum asked me where I’d been. I said I was in my room playing.
By Megan T
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On Christmas morning I unwrapped my present, opened the box and I saw.....a fountain of doors. It was shooting doors out and I had to choose a door.
As I went in the fifth door all was silent and all was dark. Then I went closer into the door. A light went on and more lights came on. An ugly monster came in and with force it locked the door with me in it.
The monster had thousands of knives and the first knife he took he tried to kill me but I kept running. But before I could kill him “beep, beep, beep” my alarm went off. I told my mum but she said it was a dream.
By Kaya S
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On Christmas morning I unwrapped my present, opened the box and I saw.....a Quail. But not your ordinary Quail, multicoloured Quail and it talks human words. I said, ‘what a neat present’. But the more I played with it the more it talked and it changed colour. Wow! A week later my adventure started but I cannot tell you anymore because IT IS TOP SECRET!
By Charlie GH
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On Christmas morning I unwrapped my present, opened the box and I saw.....a big Hairy monster. It looked like a big gorilla. It felt hairy. I ran and I ran far away. It was not what I expected! It was a hairy, smelly monster!
By Jessica B
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On Christmas morning I unwrapped my present, opened the box and I saw.....a Porsche Viper. It had a button that you push when you are sitting on the seat and all the car goes shiny. It is shiny blue and green with fire on. It has spoilers on it.
By Tyrese
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On Christmas morning I unwrapped my present, opened the box and I saw.....a magic portal to another world which is made of sweets that when you eat them they just grow back. There was a swimming pool made out of chocolate and the water was coke. A beach made of lots of sweets and everything in the world was made of chocolate, jelly beans, coke bottles, marshmallows, cake, ice-cream, gum, fudge and many, many, many, many more!
By Emily N
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On Christmas morning I unwrapped my present, opened the box and I saw.....a scary remote control shark. It breathes through its head. It is scary and it electrocuted me.
By Callum S
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On Christmas morning I unwrapped my present, opened the box and I saw.....an alligator! Its eyes glared at me! I was scared. Its tail flicked at me and I went into the water. I was gone.
By Erin H
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On Christmas morning I unwrapped my present, opened the box and I saw.....a shark tank and mini sharks. One was a Great White. The other was a Hammer Head and the last was a Tiger Shark.
George R
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